Progress report for print production (Gav)

We have completed a draft for the article. At the moment it looks appealing and suits a film magazine like 'Empire'. Also the layout is a huge strength at the moment. As the images have been put in the right areas. Generally as a whole the layout makes the article seem realistic and believable. However the copy still needs work as not all of it is up to a high standard although there are parts in the copy which are really good.

Sam worked on the layout and used Adobe Illustrator to do this. Me and Sam both wrote the copy which still needs work although is on the right track to being an impressive article. At the moment I am aiming to ensure that the language used in the article is consistent and flows. As it is for 'Empire' magazine it going to be more informal. Bilawal and Jaspal have helped in terms of proving sum ideas to take into consideration.

Techniques have been used such as alliteration, rhetorical question and a great amount of detail used with adjectives. However more techniques that need to be used are puns and really short sentences that create impact.