feedback given from the film pitch and action plan

feedback-

• change the whole plot of the trailer, and drop the idea about the bloods and crips, as the idea seems like a ' sci-fi' film as stated by Mr bush.
• include a theme which a wider audience can relate to.
• decide on the main characters and their names etc
• decide on a genre which suits the main plot
• agree on a plot which doesn't seem to vague
  

action plan-

• come up with another genre and a whole different plot, which will be much more interesting so a wider range of ages can watch the trailer.
• decide on the main plot of the trailer, and what is to be shown in the trailer
• come up with the main characters and what type of characters will be used in the trailer
• come up with another film pitch
• use a better setting which will help relate to the genre and plot